well i used to rap abit but stopped coz it got abit too commercialised and this chick im mates with wanted me to make one. So i freestyled one based on some stuff that happened IRL.

It only took me a few min coz mostly was freestyled n isnt very good but just thought i might show yall, let me know what yall think :)



When I'm sad I look happy, When im mad I don’t frown
They all walk past me without looking, its just making me down

To know that my tears been flowing, never once were they showing
And nobody notice or focused on me this year just been strolling

It's like i'm frozen, by emotion that I been holding
Trying to break free, take a breath, but I keep choking
Suffocating, thinking about my life and what ive been soaking
Drop down to me knees, feeling heart broken, just wanna keep moping

But I gotta break free, stop pulling myself down with anxiety
Get up from this darkness, forget the bliss of eternity

Who cares about what they think, its time to start living for me
Forget about suppressing it, im expressing it lyrically

Let the emotion from my heart flow outta my rhymes
Ive had enough, im saying that this is the last time

That I’ll sit back, Gotta take a step, gotta take a chance
Who cares about my confidence level, I gotta make amends

For wasting my life, for letting go of opportunity
But I gotta man up, be myself, gotta be true to me

Letting the next man, get up and do what I coulda
Thinking I wasn’t good enough, but then I shoulda

Pushed it to my limits, as far as I know I could
Shoulda done it back then, but I guess I never thought that it would

Get to the point that, I cant go back, didn’t know that
Sitting and holding back, would just be making me so sad

Making my heart pump, my blood rush, my veins pop
Feeling so much of rage, I cant stand, My head spinning, I just drop

Down to my knees and realized that ive had enough
No use sitting back, acting like its ok, trying to be tough

Just gotta be myself, gotta take a step, gotta take a chance
Realise that this life is the only 1 that I got, gotta make it intense

Pour my heart and my soul into everything that I do
They say you only sow what you reap, well now I know that its true


let me know what yall think and sorry if its in the wrong section coz it isnt exactly about 9d O.o

thanks (btw, constructive criticism is more then welcome)

Topic moved to the art section.

Liked some parts... Havent heard ya yet but as I always say toastin beats rappin especially when it comes to freestyle.

Aight listen this men!
i said this befo but i will say it again!
now top is where i stay!
while streets its a chalange fo guy like u everyday!
hey!
i leave u shocked from ur head down to ur feet if u try to play!
so if u see me comin, u better get tha fuck out of ma way!
i represent tha dark side like Dark Vador!
and if u in tha dark then im tha spark creator!
im bright as lightnin and dark as cave!
ur rhumes soooo old, u might want to shave!
hahaaa!
yeah nigga u might...
and u kno is no way round!
kid!

Nah i aint no Dj so i aint do mixin!
but i swear to god ma problems need fixin!
all kno, snitches come snitchin!
and bitches come bitchin!
but front me and i come hittin!
so u better think twice befo u come againts lines!
as hot and as sick as fuckin mines!
in these times!
i got people waitin in anticipation fo ma moves boo!
no disrespect kid, but who tha fuck is waitin on u?
see practicly im all new!
like new tigger in tha zoo!
people be watchin amazed at me of thinngs i do!
yeah!...
I could post ma whole Library

Way too much "gangsta" for me...

hhaha nicewolf
mine was just about somthing that happened but we should have a mini topic for battling xD

too sleepy today coz im about 2 go 2 bed but ill post somthing tomorrow :)

btw define what toasting means please bro ^^

Toasting = like celebrating :)

cool :)
dont really got time to make somthing too good but here's a lil quickie i made :)

OG is a slang term in Aus for 'Original Gangster' btw



Don’t be acting like an OG boy its time to ‘fess up
Talking like you know me, while ur rhymes just messed up
Coming all up in my face, boy ye im just fed up
Tell me, would ur momma dress me too if I ‘gotta- dress up’

What happened to your ego, don’t be giving me that glare
You battling a mythical emcee, I be pulling lyrics from da air

Blowing up like Osama ill be coming around
Obliterating ur reputation ill be taking you down

Lieing about ur money and ur diamonds, and whats in ur bank
By the time im done with you, like da titanic you woulda sank

Coming up in here talking crap with ur 5 dollar bling
Cut the faking, imma knock u out without having to swing

Beating u down lyrically, spitting so fast that I just cant stop
Don’t gotta touch u physically, my rhymes will make ur ego go ‘pop’

So here’s abit of advice boy, here’s a life lesson, just drop the act
Stop try-nna be Gangsta, Emcee’s like you imma be dropping n that’s a fact


just a lil somtin somtin ^^

btw nice wordplay bro, loved da darth vader line xD

The swedish thing was a part of a reggae event which is hard to explain their purpose... but its something like: "Lets go and p!ss of the rich people in their own neighbourhoods with our music". The other musicians and that event played at stages but the guys on the truck realised the rich people wouldnt come for those shows so they decided to come to them instead.

The whole event had permits but the truck didnt although because of flaws in the law they couldnt be given a fine or something...

went over my internet quota so now its at dial-up speed so cant watch those videos coz itll take forever too load >.<

Check it!
this is ma year!
so talk shit, and i tell u that i just dont care!
i swear!
i wont go wack!
i just go to stack!
and u better stay away from smack!
cuz i will hit u with full attack!
and any sucka in ma track!
cut u and snap ur leg, then snap ur back!
and only after tell u to do not come back!
u suckas can talk tha talk!
while i walk tha walk!
till i come into ur block!
and show u whats up!
u kno i stay hot from 9 till 6 o'clock!
so hot i could heat fuckin sun!
so this is enough to get u done!
son!
I lov this one. ever it made ma friend <3
and Satan. i sow them before somewhere :)